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Playing the Hero -- Chapter 8 |
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Written by Aloria
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Wednesday, 10 March 2010 |
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Chapter 8
Change of Direction
“It’s no longer necessary for us to go to Heartland,” Vathion announced as he stepped onto the bridge. “We’ll be going to Marak instead.” Vathion yawned behind his hand, aware of Gatas's scowl, but choosing to ignore it as he dropped into his seat. Wo'Chira and Li'Codas actually turned to look at him. Fae'Erekdra picked under her nails with a nail file, partially turned in her seat, legs crossed. Ma’Gatas growled. “Would you make up your mind? First Kimidas, then Heartland, now Marak! What do you want at Marak anyway?” Smiling coldly, Vathion settled back in his chair and pulled his ankle up onto the other knee. “Well, you bitched so much about Kimidas, have you changed your mind? We could still go there, you know. However, the Emperor called last night and I straightened things out with him. He’s ordered us to Marak, which is where we’re going.” |
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Written by Aloria
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Thursday, 04 March 2010 |
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I've uploaded the new version of Ch6. Shouldn't take me long to get ch7 prettied up and posted. Then I'll continue posting through to the end of the book. Remember! By purchasing a printed copy of the book you get extra artwork AND help support my unempoyed butt. : ) Playing the Hero
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6 |
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Written by Aloria
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Monday, 01 March 2010 |
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How embarrassing. I found "Wo'Amri" mentioned twice in Playing the Hero. This is a problem because SHE DOESN'T EXIST! So. I've fixed that and have searched the rest of the book to see if she shows up in place of Chira again. *sigh* I totally thought I'd fixed that the first time though. But I think what might have happened is that I had multiple copies of the story floating around between my beta readers and psudo editors and what I'd THOUGHT I fixed didn't actually get fixed in the official version. Now that I've switched PTH to yWriter5, I don't think I'll have that problem again - as I can't accidentally save over my word doc with someone else's version of edits. Anyway! The real announcement here is that Chapter 5 of Playing the Hero has been updated. |
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